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Sara Paretsky on Characters, Craft, and Courage

Sara Paretsky at Barrington White House

Author Sara Paretsky at Barrington’s White House

By Mary Klest

Sara Paretsky’s unforgettable character V.I. Warshawski along with twisted plots, intriguing settings and social commentary landed her on the New York Times best seller list. Her fearless female private investigator first appeared in Paretsky’s debut novel Indemnity Only in 1982. That launched a crime series that includes 22 books, the most recent being Pay Dirt.

Paretsky revealed her current work in progress features a different female protagonist named Lilly. What? The announcement was just one of many candid moments. Below are questions posed by BWW members during the Q&A, based on my notes and recollection.

BWW: Do you know how your book will end when you begin to write?

No. She knows the crime and some of the details, but not the ending. She lets that unpack itself as the story grows.

BWW: You wrote in a blog post that your characters take control and you bring them to life. What did you mean?

Paretsky laughed as she explained how a side character can become more important than she had originally conceived. She shared some examples from her books. Her real-life acquaintances may slip into her fiction as poignant characters.

BWW: Do you set up plot points?

No, instead she keeps track of her characters and chapters with artist sketch pads. “I’m like a tennis player who waits for the ball to come to me.” Her recent books are longer, with more intricate plots. “I’m a slow thinker and fast writer,” she said. In between novel writing she writes short stories.

BWW: What is your edit and review process like?

She described it as a meticulous and time consuming process. It lets her know when a story is not working. Her late husband had always been her first reader. She misses his support. For one book, she cut 200 pages during the review process. She added: “It’s hard to get the language right. Using contemporary slang will date the book.”

BWW: Do you have a favorite of your books?

She favors her third book, Killing Orders, inspired by her grandmother’s immigrant story. She also favors her 13th book, HardBall as it is based on her first summer in Chicago that she said changed her life. She admitted: “All my books have strengths and weaknesses.”

BWW: Where do you find ideas for the crimes in your stories?

She draws from her experience working at insurance company CNA. She keeps an eye on contemporary stories, focusing on white-collar crime. One crime story grew out of a Wall Street Journal case she found compelling.

BWW: Do you have relationships with cops, detectives?

Some, but her focus is white collar financial crime. “If I don’t understand it, I won’t write it.” She described her work as fantasy, not how-to. She once created an imaginary country for a book rather than risk inaccuracies about a real one.

BWW: Is there a particular day or time you write?

She once thrived writing between 8:00pm and midnight but sleep issues may change that routine.

BWW: What authors do you like to read?

She praised Hilary Mantel’s Wolf Hall as “a perfect novel.” She also mentioned George Elliot, Jane Austen, and Louisa May Alcott among her favorites.

From Process to Principle

In contrast to the informality of the BWW session, Sara Paretsky’s public talk was carefully crafted. Reading from prepared notes, she began with her writing process, then moved to the influence of culture on a writer’s ability to remain true to their work.

Paretsky spoke passionately about the importance of free expression. She warned against censorship, recrimination, and intimidation. She stayed in her lane as a writer, delivering thoughtful, reasoned ideas. She talked about the impact book banning in libraries has on writers and cautioned against the danger of self-censorship. What harms a writer’s voice can harm all of society by limiting the free flow of ideas.

During these polarized times, I worried that her comments might offend someone in the audience. But when Sara Paretsky finished her talk, applause filled the room and the audience rose in a standing ovation. It was as if they had been waiting for someone to say what they themselves were thinking.

It reminded me of what courage it takes to be a writer.

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“Listening to Sara Paretsky’s insights about her writing process was like having a seat in a master class. Her candor and forthcoming anecdotes about storytelling – including the nuts and bolts of her practice – were delightful, endearing and inspirational.” – Vicki Atkinson, BWW member

“I thoroughly enjoyed both parts of Sara Paretsky’s presentation. Her remarks were engaging and energizing to me. On the topic of free speech, I found her remarks both hopeful and brave. She spoke her truth clearly without getting political or resorting to name calling. I was glad I attended.” – Trudy Kleckner, BWW member

 

Raymond Benson, From James Bond to Next Door

Raymond Benson at Barrington White House

Raymond Benson, Barrington White House

Suspense writer Raymond Benson is most notably famous for writing 007 James Bond novels, but he is also known as the author of a five-book serial, The Black Stiletto and most recently a mystery novel inspired by an empty house next door to his The Mad, Mad Murders of Marigold Way. He started his talk with Barrington Writers Workshop members at Barrington’s White House saying, “There are no rules.” With that he shared what works for him as a writer.

Planning

He’s a plotter, a planner, an outliner. He wants to know how his stories end before he begins. He builds his outline with a concept, an idea in mind, based on what interests him, what’s going on in the world, or ideas that just pop into his head.

“I write an outline in block paragraphs describing what happens in each chapter. I can move the blocks around if I need to.” This usually takes him two months to write. He also recommends writing a blurb paragraph on what the book is about to stay focused and act as reference.

Setting

Some of his research focuses on the location where the story will take place. This could be the house next door or hotspots in the world that might be of interest to his audience. Once he settles on a location, he learns about it, contacts possible sources and often visits the place. “If unable to visit, Google maps can put you in a place virtually.”

Plot

To develop a plot, he thinks about who would be upset about the situation he’s created in the story. Who has stakes in the game?

Daily Goals

When he’s ready to write, he relies on his outline and sets daily goals. “I complete a chapter from beginning to end each day.” He puts it aside then reads it later that night and edits it. “Fix it. Don’t rewrite,” he says. This daily effort goes on until a first draft is finished. This is the pace he has established. “Keep your story moving at your own pace,” he says.

Action scenes

Being a suspense writer, action scenes are important to Benson. “Action is tough. Write one sentence at a time. Bit by bit, in moments, add emotions. At a key point, move fast, then slow the motion. Add sensory details. What does the character see, feel, hear?”

Revisions

After letting some time pass, Benson suggests taking a fresh look at your work. “You know where you’re going. Plug in foreshadowing, a gripper first sentence or striking first paragraph. Imagine actors playing out the scenes.”

Beta readers

Finding good beta readers can be a challenge for writers. Benson first relies on his wife. “I trust her and know she will point out areas that need work.” He chooses other beta readers based on their tastes, intelligence, expertise on a subject, what they read, and if they have a good eye.

When his work is completed, it is then scrutinized by his agent and a publisher editor.

A note about The Bond Phenomena

For those who weren’t able to attend the public talk at Barrington’s White House, Benson did reveal how he was selected to be the first American to write original James Bond novels. In 1984 Raymond Benson wrote The James Bond Bedside Companion. He dedicated the book to Ian Fleming. In it he describes and shares his knowledge of all things Bond. Since he was very familiar with the world of Bond, he became one of the successive writers to continue the legacy. Between 1997 and 2002 Benson wrote six Bond books.

BWW members were thrilled with Raymond Benson’s talk and very much appreciated all that he shared with us. You can order his books and read reviews at his website: https://raymondbenson.com/

 

Books by author Raymond Benson